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Joshua Robinson's avatar

Lovely, and I really like that quote, too. I'm curious: what made you decide to break the four lines into eight? Just wondering. You know poetry was never my strength! 😅

Anna Eplin's avatar

Thanks for asking! I think it was just an intuitive move…I liked the way it looked when I broke up the words like that, and how it seemed to give more weight to the words in the middle of lines (like “feel” and “promise”).