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Joshua Robinson's avatar

I love that you added "Look" at the beginning, as it really sets the tone for the whole poem.

Anna Eplin's avatar

Thank you! That’s helpful to hear! Another friend said the poem sounds like a rap, and I should make a video of myself saying/rapping it. 😄 Maybe I will

Joshua Robinson's avatar

Ooh, I love that idea! You should totally do it!

Anna Eplin's avatar

Thank you! 😁 I’ll let you know if I work up the nerve and do it!